1. "Lies..." is also a novel. While the film was in production
Ted sent me the script and asked me if I thought I could novelise it.
He wanted it in the first person, yet there were scenes that "Davey",
the protagonist, didn't see. I thought this was no problem. I was reading
Donlevy, who switches from third to first person seamlessly. Ted was enthusiastic
about my transposition, though he took out most of my many conjunctions,
the "ands" I had affected between so many sentences, and Ted
edited them (and) shortening the sentences very nicely, (and) he clarified
the tenses. Shortly before his death, when I was working with him on this
biography I found that he too tends to jumps haphazardly from past to
present tense. Neither of us did this seamlessly, yet. 2. Ted wrote: "A the age of two and a half I ran after a little dog on the street, fell on a broken beer bottle, was carried back to the store by a passing sailor, and Mama almost fainted. A doctor was called and he stitched up a gaping wound. I still have the scar. The sailor brought me a puppy next morning, but Papa refused to let me have it. Things didn't start off too well between me and Papa." |